Bright-eyed and Bushy-tailed

Nov 5, 2010 | 4 comments

Book Talk

     Earlier this week I visited a third grade classroom at Ocean Park School.  I was there to do a very short “book talk” and to tell the kids a little bit about the writing process.
     “Is it fun to be a writer?” a bespectacled youngster asked me.
     “Mostly, it’s hard work,” I replied.  “You have to check and double-check to see if your spelling and your punctuation are correct.  And lots of times you have start all over again.”  Heads bobbed in agreement.  Third graders know all about that.
     “But,” I assured them, “there are fun parts, too.  The most fun of all is when your work is published and then you get to go around and talk about it – just like I’m talking to you today.”  More bobbing heads.
     I just love third graders.  They are still so shiny bright and eager to learn and amazingly competent when it comes to reading and writing.  But as the years go by, something happens.  The eagerness disappears and competency does not keep pace with the increased demands of advancing grades.  Any junior high school teacher can tell you so.
     Yesterday I was visiting with a friend who, with two other college instructors, has designed an online course for an Oregon university’s MBA program.  “But none of them can write!” she lamented.  “This is a graduate course for heaven’s sake, and they can’t write a simple essay, much less execute a written business plan which is one of the course requirements. And they are insulted when they get a C- on a paper.  They are used to As.  How did they get through college?  How did they get through high school, for that matter?”
     How indeed!  In two words I told her my simplistic answer to the problems facing public education these days:  “Kindergarten Graduation!” 
     Think about it.  Traditionally, graduation was considered a rite of passage marking a student’s entrance into society in a new role as an adult.  The first Baccalaureate Ceremony goes back to 1492 at Oxford University.  We have now dumbed down the ceremony (as well as the academic expectations) until we have graduations for Kindergartners or maybe even for pre-schoolers, for all I know.
    The way I see it, that first ‘graduation’ blurs the line that once separated adulthood from childhood.  With it we begin giving children a sense of entitlement and we begin the abdication of our own adult responsibilities.  We give M&Ms for meeting simple expectations like staying on task, and there are few meaningful consequences for unacceptable behavior.  It’s not long before children are making their own decisions about all manner of things that were once in the realm called “parenting” and they become privy to a world that accepts Viagra commercials as part of prime time family entertainment.
     Yeah, yeah, yeah…  I said in the first place that Kindergarten Graduation is the simplistic answer to the ills of present-day education in America.  But looking at the implications of those two words leads  to a whole series of thoughts worth pondering.

4 Comments

  1. Nancy

    Sydney: Do you remember the way we used some of our lunch hours in 8th grade? Creating and then diagraming sentences! No cell phones, no music at the ready, no rewards for placing the adverbs and adjectives in their correct positions. Could that love of language and use of time be “responsible” for us both being writers? God bless and thank you, Dorothea Barnes.

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  2. sydney

    I also remember that in 8th grade our civics teacher, Miss Timothy, caught Elsa Lange chewing gum and made her wear it on her nose for the remainder of the class period. Not that I advocate that particular disciplinary action — but it sure kept the rest of us from chewing gum and I doubt if it ruined Elsa for life. At least, I hope not!

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  3. Linda Johnson

    I agree with most of what you said, Sydney. I don’t know that we have Kindergarten graduation in Shoreline, but we do have 6th grade graduation and middle school graduation, which we didn’t have in my day. We also move kids on to the next grade no matter what. The positive rewards system in our elementary school is ridiculous. Every time the kids do something right, they have their hand out for “super bucks.” We aren’t training them to love learning and be proud of their achievements; we’re training them to expect compensation and praise.

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  4. Stephanie Frieze

    Hear, hear, Sydney, on all counts. At the high school level most freshmen arrive knowing little to nothing of grammar and conventions much less constructing a paragraph or essay. It is sad.

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