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Is it ever too late to eat crow?

Wednesday, May 22nd, 2013

Book Cover for Dear MedoraThe other day Nyel came home from Physical Therapy with the news that there is another writer ‘out there’ named Sydney Stevens who lives in either California or somewhere on the East Coast.  A friend of Victoria’s (the Queen of PT on the Long Beach Peninsula) is reading a book by her (or possibly, him).

So, I Googled Sydney (and Sidney) Stevens (and Stephens) in various combinations, but didn’t come up with the right (write) person.  There are several of us who share this name and who surface when Googled – among them a singer from Los Angeles, a physician from Palm Desert – but no other writer that I could find.

However, I did find several sites about myself that weren’t on the web the last time I checked.  (If you’ve never Googled yourself, it’s an interesting experience.  It’s a little bit like listening to gossip about yourself; sometimes you’d like to correct ‘the record’ but you realize the futility of such an endeavor.)  Most interesting was a review of my 2007 book, Dear Medora on a site called “Book This” which bills itself as “Assisting Northwest authors, book stores, libraries and book clubs to promote and interact with people who love to read.”

The review was fabulous – the best I’ve ever seen!  It was posted on March 4th of this year purports to have come from Coast Weekend.  If it’s the freebie insert Coast Weekend that comes with every week’s Chinook Observer, I certainly missed the review the first time around.  In any case, I commend it to my readers and fans.  It can be found at:  http://bookthis.eomediagroup.org/2013/03/04/book-reivew-oysterville-author-resurrects-a-slice-of-local-history/

Medora in Portland circa 1915The part of the review that especially caught my eye was the next-to-last sentence of the final paragraph:  Ask the author and she will speak to that strange relationship that often skips the natural arbitration of time to bind distant people together.  Certainly this is the case for Stevens.  She is more than a caretaker of family memorabilia.  She has brought back beloved Medora.  Getting to know the young lady is the greatest strength of the book.  Stevens has brought us home to a goodness so often lost or overlooked in the current charge of modernism.  This book is a must for teenagers.  For the rest of us, it is a joyful rendezvous with our pioneer ancestors,

It is the “teenagers” comment that strikes a resounding chord for me.  When WSU Press was planning their initial marketing strategy for Dear Medora, they suggested that it should be presented as a book for Teens or Young Adults.  I adamantly (and, in retrospect, no doubt wrongly) insisted that it be marketed for the general reading public.

Dear Medora has been anything but a run-away best seller.  I wonder if things might have been different if I hadn’t been so headstrong.  And is it way too late to be eating crow?

The Long and the North of It!

Saturday, May 18th, 2013

Paul Staub’s map of the North Beach Peninsula on page 7 of “Legendary Locals of the Long Beach Peninsula”

If there’s one thing I’ve always hung my Historical Hat on, it’s the official versus the popular name of this Peninsula.  In almost everything I write, I find a way to point out that according to the United States Board on Geographic Names (under the jurisdiction of the Department of the Interior), our little finger of land is still legally and officially the North Beach Peninsula.  It is only due to a vigorous public relations campaign mounted by the city of Long Beach in the early twentieth century that we are now shown on local and regional maps as “Long” rather than “North.”

In fact, in my most recent book, published less than a month ago, I point out in paragraph one of the Introduction:  The tiny finger of land in the southwestern-most corner of Washington State is popularly known as the Long Beach Peninsula.  Officially, however, it is still the ‘North Beach Peninsula,’ so-named because it stretches northward from the mouth of the Columbia as opposed to the Oregon beaches to the south.   By whatever name, it is an area that gives rise to rugged individualists, independent thinkers, creative dreamers, and innovative problem-solvers.

Nevertheless, when it came to the book’s title, I had to capitulate to those pesky bottom line concerns.  I had to face the fact that a book called Legendary Locals of the Long Beach Peninsula would have more chance of selling than would “Legendary Locals of the North Beach Peninsula” – especially out in the greater world.

I wasn’t completely happy with the choice but marketing is marketing.  It didn’t occur to me that the book would be boycotted in certain local circles because of its title!  Fortunately, I think it’s just a small group of dyed-in-the-wool “North-Enders,” maybe even only two or three people.  And it’s mostly through the Oyster Shell Telegraph (the local ‘grapevine’) that I know of their attitude.  That plus the fact that an advertising poster about the book displayed on the bulletin board Jack’s Country Store was defaced.

Apparently, someone took a felt-tipped marker, crossed out “Long” and wrote in “North” on the book’s title.  An employee noticed the graffiti and removed the poster, later substituting a new one.  The store is one of many businesses on the Peninsula that is selling the book, and though I haven’t had an opportunity to discuss the incident or the rationale behind the title with owner/manager Tom Downer, I’m pretty sure he and I would be shaking our heads in mutual astonishment at this bit of reaction.

North Beach Push Club Brochure circa 1910

North Beach Push Club brochure circa 1910

Years ago, when Tom first got serious in his campaign to restore the Peninsula’s official name, or at least to change it to something more neutral and less tied to just one location, he borrowed my North Beach Peninsula research file.  It contains copies of all the documents on file at the Board on Geographic Names dating back to 1950 and the earliest attempts by Roy Sheldon and the Ocean Park Chamber of Commerce to re-establish the “true, recorded name of this peninsula area.”

The fact that someone “corrected” a poster about my book that was displayed on Jack’s bulletin board seems doubly ironic to me.  I hope whoever did the dirty deed takes the time to actually read the book – or at least the book’s introduction.  Maybe the culprit would even learn something!

…and tomorrow I get to do it again!

Tuesday, May 14th, 2013

Book SigningI’m surprised at the number of people who have asked me how my book signing at Adelaide’s went on Saturday.  It never occurred to me to ‘report’ about it afterwards but, for all of my kind friends who have inquired, I will say, “It was great!”

Katie and Joel had rearranged things in the bookstore end of the building to accommodate a couple of dozen folding chairs and had even provided me with a ‘lectern’ of sorts for my notes.  (I loved it that it was a music stand.  Did you know that Joel is a musician with his own band in Portland?)  The chairs filled up – except for the three directly in front!  Why is it that people hesitate about front row seats? – and a number of people stood in the back.  Nyel counted “at least 26” which seemed the perfect number for the space.

There was a nice mix of ‘legendary locals’ and other people from the community who I know or who have familiar faces, as well as a sprinkling of complete strangers.  Many of them had bought books previously and had come in to hear me talk and to get my signature.  Some told me they had come to get additional copies.  It was definitely a feel-good sort of crowd!

I talked about the Arcadia Publications phenomenon – how they have 8,000 titles in print with more coming every day and how Legendary Locals of the Long Beach Peninsula differed from the other books I’ve done for them.  I told about my research struggles and the difficulties in getting acceptable (to Arcadia) photographs, especially of the Chinooks,  of the pioneers and early settlers and of the Chinese cannery workers.  I talked a little about Arcadia’s stringent writing requirements and how my listeners, too, could become Arcadia authors.

Afterwards I asked, in good teacherly fashion, if there were any questions.  I was surprised at how many great questions about my writing process there were and was somewhat amazed (and pleased!) that I was asked what I was working on now.  Never mind that one person asked how my Willard book was ‘selling’ – as in I’m quite sure she knew the manuscript had recently been rejected by WSU Press.  I think she meant it as a kindly encouragment and had no idea that it’s a sensitive subject just now…

One man held up a copy of The Long Beach Peninsula’s I R &N (the first book I wrote for Arcadia) and told a cute story about the train that ran through his town when he was a kid.  (And speaking of the ‘teacher mode, I had to bite my tongue not to say, as I would have to first graders, “Are you asking something?  Or are you telling?”)  But, he actually bought that railroad book and had me sign it.  He had come in late and I don’t think he had a clue that I was actually talking about another book entirely!

I lost count of how many books I signed afterwards.  There were several people who said they would see me Wednesday (that’s tomorrow!) at the Picture Attic in Long Beach where they intend to buy more!  Wow!  That gathering is from 2:00 to 4:00 and, in case you need another incentive to attend, Picture Attic owner Jean Nitzel is planning to serve refreshments!  See you there.

Oh boy! Here comes the weekend!

Friday, May 10th, 2013

Tomorrow is the long-awaited first book-signing of Legendary Locals of the Long Beach Peninsula – at Adelaide’s, 1:00 to 3:00 o’clock!  Little did I know when I made the date that it would be sandwiched in among personal appointments, necessary meetings and a funeral.  But, come to think of it, those unrelated events are what make up the activities of this community, just as the book is about people who are at the center of it all.

IBook Display’m excited about the book-signing in all the usual ways. It’s kind of like holding an open house.  Will anyone come? What should I wear?   Will there be familiar faces?  I go through the same angst each time a new book comes out and I always wonder if other authors do, too.

This past year we’ve gone to two book-signings.  One was at Murder by the Book in Portland where we met Craig Johnson, author of the “Walt Longmire” series;  the other was at Time Enough Books in Ilwaco where we listened to our friend Bob Pyle tell about his latest book.  I thoroughly enjoyed both occasions.

In each case, the authors were well-known, the events were standing-room-only, and their remarks were extensive and infinitely interesting.  I should have taken notes!  Not that any of the aforementioned circumstances will be similar, but I always feel a bit at a loss when it comes to the what-to-say part.

Maybe tomorrow will be different.  It seems logical that many of the legendary locals, themselves, will be there and that will surely shift the focus away from me.  And, in our small community – even in our greater community – everyone will know everyone.  That will be the icing on this particular cake.  I really can’t wait.

And the answer, my friends, is…

Tuesday, May 7th, 2013
Dinner Table Lilacs

Dinner Table Lilacs

I’ve always been a bit smug about apostrophes.  They came right after capitals and periods during all the years I taught primary grades.  The rules for using apostrophes are so simple that even second graders could master them.  So, I was absolutely flabbergasted to find that it was an apostrophe that caused my most recent cyberspace problems.

Day before yesterday I blogged about my friend Stephanie’s always-welcoming kitchen table and I had a gorgeous photograph of Saturday’s centerpiece of lilacs that I wanted to use to illustrate my blog.  No matter what I did, I could NOT get that photograph to load onto the wordpress blog site.

I turned the problem over to Keleigh Schwartz and beachdog.com.  They worked on it diligently and late yesterday came up with the answer.  I had named my jpg photograph “At Stephanie’s Table” and it was the apostrophe in the title that was fouling me up.  As instructed by my web gurus, I removed and renamed and… voilà!  I was able to add the photograph to my blog.

Today I’m going to use that very same photograph, now called “Dinner Table Lilacs,” so readers can see it without going back to the previous post.  And speaking of ‘previous,’ I did actually blog about the use of apostrophes on May 24th last year in a rant I titled “Apostrophes are Simple.  Really.”  In it I explained and illustrated these three rules:

Rule #1.  Do not use an apostrophe if you want to make a word plural.  Not ever.
Rule #2.  Do use an apostrophe when you write a contraction.
Rule #3.  Do use an apostrophe when you want to show possession.

Now, of course, there is Rule #4:  Do not use an apostrophe in the name of a photo.  At least, not if you are using whatever combination of tricky software programs that I am apparently hooked up with.  Who knew?

Setting our Sights on the Bottom Line!

Friday, May 3rd, 2013

Book CoverYesterday I ran into Jimmy Kemmer in Ocean Park.  “I hear I’m on a Wanted Poster at Jack’s!” he laughed.  He was referring, of course, to his picture on the cover of my just-out book,  Legendary Locals of the Long Beach Peninsula.  The cover has been reproduced as a poster of various sizes and this end of the Peninsula seems to be papered with them!  Hooray!!

I’m happy to say that I’ve had quite a bit of feed-back about that book cover already.  When I posted it online, Jessica Murfin wrote:  “Is that my beloved grandmother on the lower right?”  And neighbor Bradley pointed out to neighbor Susan Holway that she is a “cover girl, at last!”

I love the buzz and hope that it translates into lots of sales for local retailers.  I understand that many Peninsula businesses, not just bookstores, are carrying the book.  Yesterday when I was out and about I saw a display at Bailey’s Bakery snd Café and also at Adelaide’s Coffee and Books.  And, they both report that there have already been book sales!  Hooray some more!

One of the questions that Cate Gable asked me during an interview for the Chinook Observer—see her great article in this week’s issue! – was, “Will there be a Part II?  It was a logical question posed during my description of how hard it was to decide who to include in the book.  For a book about people who have made a lasting difference in the community, the Long Beach Peninsula offers a plethora of choices.  I don’t doubt that it would be possible to write a Part II.

So, I contacted my editor at Arcadia Publications and asked if there was a precedent in this new Legendary Locals series for doing a follow-up book.  “Not yet,” was the answer, “but we have discussed the possibility.”

She went on to say that it all hinges on the sales of this first book.  They are looking at a bottom line of 2,000 books sold.  “Piece of cake!” said Katie Uram at Adelaide’s.

I love Katie’s enthusiasm!  Having been in the book biz, myself, for many years, I am a bit more reserved in my thinking.  But then… we never had a book for sale that covered such a wide swath of people, places, stories, and history of the Peninsula!

So, what I say is:  “Buy that book!  Get copies for your relatives!  Give it for gifts to far-away friends!  Set your sights on that 2,000 goal!”  And, meanwhile, I’m keeping a list of possible subjects for a Part II – suggestions welcome!

Dreams, Choices, Bottom Lines

Friday, April 19th, 2013

1975, Nov. 24, Publicity Shot for Words at PlayYesterday’s mail brought the unwelcome news that my book about Willard Espy “in its current form is not one that fits the current WSU Press publishing goals.”  The letter, while disappointing in the extreme, contained good news as well as bad.  Or at least it seemed so to me.

Editor Robert Clark went on to say, “What you have given us is a charming, personal history of the Espy family and the town of Oysterville, with Willard at the center of the story.”  YES!  I’m so glad they ‘got’ that!  That was the point of the book.

In fact, Mr. Clark’s description is a very succinct version of what I, myself, had written in my initial proposal to WSU Press:  “Espy’s Own: Willard of Oysterville” is part biography, part memoir, part recollection and part historical narrative.  It is the story of author Willard Richardson Espy’s relationship to Oysterville, the tiny southwest Washington village where he grew up in the early decades of the twentieth century and where he was to spend many of the most important intervals of his next 88 years.

Book Cover for Dear MedoraMy intent (and the main reason for submitting the book to this particular publisher) was to write Willard’s biography in such a way that it would become a companion piece to Dear Medora:  Child of Oysterville’s Forgotten Years.  That book was published by WSU Press in 2007.  Unfortunately, it has sold sparingly; it hasn’t flown off the shelves.  It is definitely a “niche book” and, no doubt, was an unusual choice for an academic press.  Perhaps the fact that they had a different editor then had bearing on that decision.

According to reviewers, the charm of Dear Medora is its personal touch.  It gives readers an insider’s view of the Espy family and of Oysterville in the early twentieth century.  Ironically, this was at the heart of Mr. Clark’s objection to the manuscript about Willard:  “These personal memories, combined with family stories and excerpts from family correspondence, have a rather narrow focus, and no doubt would be of most interest to family and friends.”

He goes on to suggest that I consider rewriting the book along the lines of a “more traditional biography” or, barring that choice, to look at the possibility of self-publishing.  Or, as a third alternative, he says, WSU could serve as a “book packager” providing “editing, design, layout, and production services, and deliver to you any number of books you wish to distribute.”

Of course, the bottom line is money.  If Dear Medora had made more money for them… If marketing and distribution weren’t so spendy… If I had the financial ability to self-publish a book with the look and feel I envision… Or, I could bite the bullet and rewrite.

Perhaps my thoughts will clarify as my disappointment dissipates…

The Final Go-’Round – No Pressure!

Friday, March 15th, 2013

Correcting ProofsWhen I made my ‘great big noisy fuss’ á la Ramona Quimby ten days ago, I earned myself a second set of proofs for my upcoming book Legendary Locals of the Long Beach Peninsula.  They arrived in a pdf (portable document format) file via email late Wednesday and I have until Tuesday morning to make the final corrections and return it.  No Pressure.

Under ‘ordinary circumstances’ that should be plenty of time to go through the 128-page book (22,071 words/179 photographs) with a fine-toothed comb.  But, of course, whose circumstances are ever ordinary?  A quick check of my calendar revealed that every day is clotted up with something – a meeting yesterday morning, a haircut this morning, a medical appointment for Nyel this afternoon…  And so it goes.

The weekend looks much better.  But the Grand Re-Opening of the Ocean Park Timberland Library is tomorrow.  And the Peninsula Quilt Guild’s annual quilt show is at the Columbia Pacific Heritage Museum today, Saturday and Sunday only.  Granted, these should be optional sorts of events but, somehow, they don’t feel that way.  Not only do we want to go, we feel some urgency about it.  After all, we have friends involved in all of the above and attending things of this nature is what living in a small community is all about.

So, as usual, I’m working “around the edges.”  There was a time when I could spend a few round-the-clock days and get it done, but I’ve finally reached an accommodation with the knowledge that my mind goes into Relaxation Mode about the time the chickens go to bed.  So… No Pressure.

Book CoverFortunately, the most blatant errors of the first proofs have been taken care of.  But there are still some whopping mistakes, to say nothing of the subtle inconsistencies of style and weird grammatical imponderables – sometimes a matter of my way or theirs.  (And we all know who will come out on top in those instances.  As my first publisher told me back in the 1960s, “Sydney, writers are a dime a dozen.  There’s always another author available if you can’t do it our way.”  Not that I think that applies directly in the current case, but…)

All in all, though, the book is looking great and  I’m tempted to let myself get excited about it.  I think it is full of interesting stories about fabulous people – people from long ago, people we remember, people we know.  But before I get carried away, I have a deadline to meet…  No Pressure!

Worth A Thousand Words!

Thursday, March 14th, 2013

Greg Rogers' Drawing of Oysterville StoreMy article about Greg Rogers and his ideas for the “new” Oysterville Store ran in yesterday’s Chinook Observer.  I was pleased to see that it began on the front page – right on the fold, to be sure, but still attention-getting with its headline, “Back to old business in Oysterville” and “Greg Rogers reopens the Oysterville Store” as the sub-head.

The article is word-for-word as written which is always a bit worrisome.  No one to blame for any mis-statements or factual errors.  I haven’t had any feedback about it yet, not even from Greg – also worrisome.  However, as I re-read my pearls of thought, I felt pretty good about it.  Greg sounds like the kind of guy you’d like to meet (he is!) and the store sounds like a place you want to be for its Memorial Weekend opening!

My only disappointment was that Greg’s drawing of the store’s interior did not accompany the article, probably because of space limitations.  Greg is known world-wide for his drawings.  It’s not that he is a visual artist in the usual sense of things.  He is an interior designer, specializing in furniture and lighting.

Unlike others in his profession, he hasn’t segued into using CAD (computer-aided design) programs.  He does it the old-fashioned way with “pencils, erasers and whiteout.”   According to neighbor Bradley Huson, himself a designer, Greg may be the only top designer on the planet who still actually draws.

So I thought it was a real coup when Greg offered me a sketch of his concept for what the inside of the store will look like – a sneak peek at what is happening behind the closed door and drawn curtains right now, as we speak.  I really thought that it would get far more attention by the newspaper than my article would.  But… no.

And then I thought, thought I, “Aha!  One more reason that I have a blog.  I can still share that visual thousand words with my readers.”  Not that my readership approaches that of the Observer.  But, still…

“The Seven Wives of Josiah Crouch”

Tuesday, March 5th, 2013

Oysterville Baptist Church 1903When I asked Cuzzin Ralph to do a little research about Josiah Crouch, I had no idea that I would be presented with the seeds of another book… maybe.  It all came about because of an ongoing discussion I’ve been having with singer/songwriter Larry Murante.

Some years ago, Larry wrote a wonderful ballad about the ghost who hangs around our house – the house that used to be a parsonage.  Her name is Mrs. Sarah Crouch.  In Larry’s song, she is the third wife of an early Baptist preacher here in Oysterville, the not-so-righteous Josiah Crouch.

Sarah drowned under rather mysterious circumstances on the Willapa River in July 1893.  Though marks were found on her neck, it was decided that they were inconclusive and Josiah was not arrested.  He left town shortly afterwards, however… with another man’s wife.  But, I digress.

The following November a letter arrived at the Oysterville Post Office from Topeka, Kansas.  It began …I am the ferst [sic] wife of one Josiah Crouch.  I was married to him the 5 day of August in 1885 at St. Joseph, Mo. County Buccanan [sic].  In 1888 he left me at Havensville Kans and I understand that he went to Ark. In 1889 he married a woman by the name of Tedden at Gladstone Ark as I had too [sic] letters from D. P. Tedden the father of his last wife.  I have a little girl 7 years old.  It was signed Tillie Crouch.

My discussion with Larry revolves around that letter.  His interpretation is that Tillie was Josiah’s first wife, that the Tedden woman was the second, and that Sarah Crouch was the third.  I wrote Cuzzin Ralph (a research wizard to my way of thinking) to see if he could find out what Sarah’s maiden name was.  And voilà!! It was Tedden!  But that was only part of what Ralph found out!

Josiah Crouch continued marrying.  By the time of his death in 1942, he had been wed seven times!  He had also been defrocked from the ministry, had become an attorney but was disbarred for committing a felony and who knows what else.  The obvious question, of course:  what happened to his other wives?  Did any of them, besides our Sarah, die prematurely and under mysterious circumstances?  Were there ever any divorces recorded or was he a bigamist from the get-go?

I think there may be a book here, or maybe several!  To say nothing of another song or two!  Stay tuned…as they say.